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You pick your favorite tie,
your eyes dark, filled with craving.
Staring at the floor,
I dare not meet your gaze,
Panting,
But terrified all the same.
I hold up my wrists,
And you move swiftly with talent.

I kneel before you,
My blood boiling,
Your fist in my hair.
I tilt my head back,
Your lips,
Scorching my skin.

My vision now compromized,
I feel hollow and lost.
Desire,
Coursing through my veins.
And then it comes,
A single hard blow.
My body wrenches,
My flesh sizzles,
My scream echos.

Beads of sweat,
Cold against my skin,
Collecting in the small of my back.
I know I can do it,
For you my love,
But thirty six more times,
Restores my faith in suffering.

My fragile body,
Now battered and debased,
Covered in cuts and bruises,
The scars of which will never fade.

Tears stream down,
My mascara smeared,
As you stand astride,
Mocking my anguish.

There's a blurred line,
Between pain and pleasure.
My temptation unsatisfied.
I know,
You have nothing more to give,
Of this decadent lifestyle.
I usually write what comes to my mind without thinking but with this i thought of the topic before and formed the writing around it... feel free to critique..
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essie23 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is more about a masochist who sort of tells the sadist what he does and feels. I like how you wrote it :)
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
yes. :) thank you
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Connya Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Seems more like a masochist rather than a sadist :D Love beyond words
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
hehe...thank you :)
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Connya Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you are most welcome
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lennykagamine19 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
Beautifully written but something is off for me. I have no idea what it is tho..... But the composure it simply amazing. Job well done!
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
you know one other person told me that...that there was something off about it..and he too said he didnt know what..lol..i wanna know!!! hehhehe thank you
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KentraSnow Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oho. Sounds like Shotarella.
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hotchillispice Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
umm..i don't think i know what/who shotarella is *shifty eyes*
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KentraSnow Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*evil laughter* Something like this. But with Shota (boy under the age of fourteen and his boyfriend who's definitely a sadist.)
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